Reflection and Feedback

Feedback in regards to Bilal Haider Syed (Lavarr Williams)

After analyzing in depth the journal written by Bilal in the perspective of Brandir,I happened noticed that Bilal did an amazing job with displaying the sorrow that Brandir held due to the passing of Nienor. Ranging from the reminiscing of the moments spent strolling in the forest and depicting the nature in a whole, to the descriptive metaphors displayed that depicted the feeling of loosing something that was close to the heart, along with mentions of multiple other slight details. Trembling down to the thoughts of having a meaningless life in which was perceived as not having value. In regards to the unfortunate mishaps to not be deserved, he displayed somewhat a flush of emotion from the characters point of view, through journal at this particular time. Most importantly it was clear that there is a significant amount of mourning and grief being shown.

Character Analysis Reflection for Isbah (Thineash John) 

Isbah I liked the way you set up the paragraphs with subtitles. You made your paragraphs very organized. After reading your character analysis, I learned many things about the character and their characteristic. I would add the fact Hurins's Tragic flaw as he was a tragic hero. Hurins Tragic flaw is that his pride which in the end was  responsible for the most majority of his problems and difficulties. I would like to add that Turins motives is not just to defeat Morgoth and in specific to get rid of Morgoth's evil spirits. On all three of the characters you are focusing on the background and what has happned to them recently. You are not sating their character traits and their personality. Example the first quote you had provided for Beleg. You should state that Beleg was a great warrior die to the fact that he served in many battles. Overall you did a good job on you character Analysis.

First Impression Reflection for Thineash (Bilal Haider Syed)

I think that you did a fairly good job giving a quick summary on the events that occurred during the first twenty or so pages and you pointed out all the key characters that were present in the first part of the novel. You also made a well contemplated hypothesis of what Turin’s actions may be later on in the tale. All of the First Impression was very well put in terms of the story line, but you made many spelling and grammatical errors. Also I feel that you should have put in some more ideas of what Turin might do in the future. “I predict that he dies because he goes through numerous battles and fights,” is a bit vague although you deserve my prior compliment nonetheless. You should have also thought of the other important characters that you mentioned. In what way would their character benefit in the story line? There were other parts that were supposed to be mentioned as well like settings, characters, the tone of the tale, and much more. Overall, very nice quick summary, but you still could have written much more about what you thought of the first twenty pages. Also please edit, re-read, and re-write next time.

First Impression Reflection for Lavarr (Isbah Masood)

Lavarr my friend, I liked the fact that you elaborated on your character analysis. Your paragraph looks organized, however,  it seems as if you can add a but more details and be more specific.  For example, you can talk about what might happen to these characters in the futrue or what their tragic flaw is, maybe even their character traits.. Overall, I think your character analysis was nice and neat. Well done brotha.